Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Rain

Together we are, hand in hand, inseparable.
I look up, rain softly coming down from the clouds above
to the cold earth beneath us.
No distractions, no sound,
but the rain as it trickles onto the pavement.
Just us--no one else.
If i slip,
I know you would catch me.
Inseparable,
we rise together,
we fall together,
inseparable in the rain.

2 comments:

Hannah said...

I really like this one alot. Its so simple, yet so sweet, and so nice. Nice job. =D

Kate Knepprath said...

ali! wow. i love this piece sooo much! i can just picture a couple walking in the rain and the girl slipping. this is a really sweet piece! keep up the great writing!

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